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Kept


these five cold walls construct a tiny room with a metal-barred door to keep me here. this place has been my home for quite some time now and i grow old and weary in waiting. faces often come and go. peering in with vague, diminishing curiosity, bright-eyed and eager to know what this cage contains. they visit briefly giving me their love and affection. and my heart flutters with hope of a home to belong to, and others to love and be loved by. but i do not hold their interest long. for i grow old and wearing in waiting. and their attention quickly dwindles. my heart aches when i see them go, and i am left here. alone. it is not my will to be kept here but here I will be kept until someone wishes to keep me.
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NRose
<p>Great poem! I wrote one kinda like this but it was instead from the perspective of an animal in a slaughter house. You should check it out!</p>
NRose
<p>Great poem! I wrote one kinda like this but it was instead from the perspective of an animal in a slaughter house. You should check it out!</p>
marie
This is beautiful. Your stanza "faces often come and go./peering in with/vague, diminishing curiosity,/bright-eyed and eager/to know what this/cage contains" is truly haunting. It would be great to see you write a poem that focused on little interactions such as this one, paying particular attention to the parts of a face, for example. Amazing job.

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