kiss a man

Thu, 08/16/2012 - 18:09 -- Cece22

kiss a man
kiss kiss
kissing another man
that disgusting
faggot you gay
probably caught HIV
by kissing me
kissing you
i kiss my boyfriend so what if you don't
look you can stop and stare i don't care
homosexuals are every where
they are here to stay
your gonna get use to it any way

Comments

jwiener

Not only does this poem send a strong message but your use of rhyming in the last four lines of the poem really helped to make the reader understand your purpose in writing the poem.

The Darcy Perspective

Powerful- except it's "you're" not "your" :)

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