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kisses

by destinysmith514

Your kisses feel me with so much joy I can't even explain how it feel's.

Kisses show how you really feel about me.

With a kiss show how much I mean to you.

Does my kisses take your breath away, like your's does to mine.

Wtih a kiss like yours no other can compare to the sweet mint you leave behind when your done.

May my kiss stay on your mind thoughout the day.

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Nadia Skye
<p>*fill</p><p>*feel&#39;s needs no &#39;</p><p>just feels</p><p>*Do my kisses not &#39;does&#39; OR does you kiss</p><p>*With not Wtih</p><p>*You&#39;re not your</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>Sorry if my editing seems rude, but I&#39;m just trying to help :)</p><p>When writing, you always want to make sure your grammar and spelling and punctuations are proper, otherwise it takes away from the otherwise awesome thing you wrote.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>I really like the poem. Keep up the good work!</p>

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