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Lace


Agony from the chronic eruption of nerves that delicately lace through my spine and entwine into vines of erotic discord electrically paralyze limbs, torso, oh ignorance. Beckoning my exhaust, I hull my skeleton from cold to catastrophic bitter nips from wind. Where, and am I proving strength? Strings, resembling aged marionettes, pulled by thoughts of survival to compensate for the added burden of a body grinding against its’ natural inclination to halt, shudder, cease movement. Sparks fly from friction, my sparks are held in swollen blood gathered in my knees, hips, back and finally, fingers. My concentration could be deemed as inadequate under pressure. “I feel like collapsing” I sigh, because I might. I probably have, but pride guides me to barely adjust. Envy in seeing so many move freely, while I am chained to a great misunderstanding. Save me, my eyes say, take and eradicate my pain with comfort. Relieve me.  

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erikabeatpoetry

I am an aspiring writer and poet in my senior year of high school. I am a survivor of emotional and financial abuse, as well as fibromyalgia, PCOS, POTS, and many other medical illnesses. I have depression caused by my abuse and medical issues and I try to overcome the struggles presented in my life. I love classic rock, poetry, and vinyl records and the best traits that would describe me would be shy, understanding, and empathetic.

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erikabeatpoetry
<p>Thank you! I'm sorry you suffer with fibro, too. It's hard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!</p>
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<p>This is beautiful; I've never connected so well with something about fibro :')</p><p>Much love,&nbsp;</p><p>Lauren</p>

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