Lago's Betrayal
I pass through
each website
belonging to none
The bards
of the first
to the next unbecome
Opinions
are chanted
as ego’s cavort
The green-eyed
monster
— where prescience holds court
(Dreamsleep: February, 2026)
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Mix of personal observation and abstract meditation on ego, envy, opinion.
Dense conceptual layers compressed into few lines; multiple ideas stacked.
Critical, envious tone. Green-eyed monster conveys jealousy and negativity.
Moderate intensity from fragmented syntax and dark concepts; restrained delivery.
Micro poem: 6 lines total, including attribution.
Rich metaphors: green-eyed monster, prescience holding court, ego's cavort.
Primarily lyric internal voice observing self and others; minimal dramatic distance.
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