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LAST CALL


Last Call, Slam Those Drinks.. Cause I'm Pouring Shots & This Rounds On Me. After That You All Gotta Leave. Ya Don't Gotta Go Home, But Ya Can't Stay Here With Me.. No Apologies, Cause My Chariot Is Waiting For Me. Cause I'm Riding Solo To The Top, Call Me The Goat.. G.O.A.T Yo, T.K.O Like I Was Ali. I Come In Like A Butterfly, But It's Gonna Sting When I Leave. Yeah I Crushed Those Mountains Like I Was A Jeep. All While I Was Sippin' On My Slurpee. Yeah, Little Ol'Me, Mr. Mustard Seed. Cause With A Little Bit Of Faith, Was All That I Needed. To Find The Reason That I Breathe. Yeah Cause There's Only One Seat & it Was Made For Me... So Who Ever Has My Keys, Now They're Yours To Keep. 'Cause I've Reached High Enough On This Summit, To Capture My Dreams.. Yeah & There's This Feeling That Comes Over Me,Every Now & Again. Got Me Thinking "I Can't Believe This Isn't A Dream." So I'd Take In A Deep Breath & I'd Pinch Myself. To Make Sure That I'm Not Dreaming. Thinking, "This Is So Surreal", I Had Nothing, No One & Nowhere To Go, But God Heard My Prayers & He Stepped In & He Saved Me. Then It Hit Me Like, Oh My! No My Life Will Never Be The Same.. & No It's Not The Spotlight Or The Fame. No Not The Sold Out Shows On Every Stage, No, Cause It's The Love Of Music & I'm Finally Loving Me. Yeah Cause I Am Music.. I Go To See The World As It Comes To Meet Me. Where At This Point I Still Just Can't Even Believe., That I Am Who I Said I'd Be, As I Always Knew I Was & I Will Always Be. Yeah, This Isn't Just A Dream...
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My Name Is Joe Lilley w/ The Alias Levi DiVine. I'm A Musician, Poet and Lyricist,

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Primarily personal triumph narrative with some abstract faith elements

SparseMeasureDense

Rapid shifts between braggadocio, spiritual reflection, gratitude, identity affirmation

DarkSentimentBright

Overwhelmingly positive, celebratory, grateful, self-affirming throughout

StillEnergyExplosive

High-kinetic language: rapid-fire metaphors, exclamations, aggressive confidence mixed with wonder

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 45 lines; substantial mid-to-long form

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Rich metaphors (butterfly/sting, Jeep/mountains, seeds, chariot, summit, dreams)

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric first-person voice; internal reflection and direct address to audience

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