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the last i love you


"I love you babe"

"Love you to Nancy, when are you coming back?"

"I don't know, I'm having a lot of fun here."

"Okay well don't have too much fun without me"

"I love you babe"

"umm, I love you too, is everything okay?.....See you soon!"

When morning came it all seemed too perfect

The skies were blue, the breeze was cool but more importantly, it was quiet.

Leaving to go to a game and taken home by my aunt and uncle with tears in their eyes

I started to become unease

arriving home with feeling colder and more anxious to know whats going on.

when the door to my house opened a scream of terror shook my whole body.

my father pulled me to the side with his voice cracking and slowly saying

Shes gone

Who?

Nancy was killed in a motorcycle accident last night 

Body was so numb and cold, I couldn't move 

The world started to spin, my emotions starting rushing out like a swarm of bees

the feeling of losing someone was the most pain I've felt in my life.

 

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