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Last Night


it was just fear and excitement saturated in dream articulate and sensible at the time. recited it in my head last night hoping I could regurgitate the events but its too far from present. left with residual emotion and not enough room in my noose tied to a dream to think of anything more than a poem written in prose
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jwiener
This poem has such a dreamlike quality to it, which fits, since you reference dreams throughout it. The last two lines struck me the most, because the imagery is so intense:"not enough room in my noose". If you like writing about dreams and would like some ideas, go to "poetry writing tips" under the "resources" section where you'll find some tips for writing poems about dreams!

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