Last Place

by sharpsierra01

August 31, 2018

I text you first because you're the one I hold dear,

You respond a quick nothing before you disappear,

I make random excuses just to feel close to you but you always put me last,

And now I'm realizing I should make you my past.

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S.zaynab.kAug 31, 2018

<p>Yay way to go, time to move on and start afresh. There's plenty of fish in the sea. Super rhyming poem I liked . Kudos.</p><p> </p><p> </p><div>i see  it is not common here at all but plz Pleez  do write your thoughts/comment/ review under my newest poem too. I like exchange of thoughts.</div>