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Lesson 38


Lesson 38 Turned 39 a few days ago and it just dawned on me, in all honesty, I need to keep it G and this is how you know you gotta be The greatest lesson I mastered at 38 is when challenges arise, I am facing them with a smile and that is the real art of living When you fully understand that we do not battle flesh and blood so when hated or degraded by love one's, I keep on forgiving and I'll keep on forgiving, thou shall wont keep on sinning, thou shall wont keep on stealing, Lord willing... I promise I have no hard feelings when the majority judge me and talk ugly on my name, trust me I aint trippin. I am comfortable in my own skin, I don't need attention to feel worthy and I will always stand by what I say. I am not easily fooled, I am different, spiritually gifted, walk in The Holy Spirit, I Am a Chosen One and billions are called and how many do you believe answer y'all???? Very very few and when you have a beautiful heart with pure intentions who stays true??? You will be ridiculed, cut loose and laughed at to, for you saying, " we ain't ever been to the moon, the 🌎 is flat, everything on the News is bull crap and on that Jesus is coming very soon " Because I stated Facts, folks believe I definitely have more than a few screws loose and this is coming from love one's who say and claim they love me too. I truly do understand that people don't want truth, they want comfort dressed as truth/what's Krazy to me is how fast somebody can believe a lie with no proof/but need all the proof in the 🌎 to even think, let alone believe what you're saying is truth. But it's ku, I have Shalom dude, I'll still remember to continue showing you love will always tell myself, " rremember Derm that I didn't lose anyone... They lose you. Listen dude, the human that sees clearly is the person that ends up not fitting in on any state, city, place or town Awareness creates isolation, but still seeing people with the masks that they're wearing for the hidden motives so I noticed that most humans are just geese following the crowd Then when I attempt to share what I'm seeing and try to bring discernment, I could already hear it, " you serious, really Dermish? " Then call me a Krazy 880 pound Amy Winehouse???... I'm like how??? I know I ain't perfect and I do say some weird things but when it's all said and done, certified real ones and your personal certified real ones including Jehovah, will all say " Derm is real "/and you know Derm will steal at will sealed Pokemon Sword & Shield from a Navy and his ladies aka Stacie's heels/and if you question if I can pick-up your son and chill and grab a happy meal, or for you if I would kill????... well I guess your love wasn't, ISRAEL.... 💯
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Deeply personal autobiography with spiritual lessons from lived experience.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple ideas per 10 lines; rapid shifts between philosophy, confession, accusation.

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Mixed: defensive/hurt but ultimately affirming self-worth and spiritual peace.

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Urgent, conversational intensity with rhetorical questions and exclamatory declarations.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 45 lines; extended meditation with multiple stanzas.

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Some metaphor (masks, geese) and personification but mostly direct declaration.

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Pure lyric first-person voice; introspective and confessional throughout.

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