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Let the Ashes Rise!


Let the ashes rise and disperse Till there's nothing left of the earth Let the greed die from those among us who lie Let the ashes that remain above the already occupied Graves disperse into the dirt where they lye to never be seen again on this already tainted Earth Can you save those that are already too far gone? Can you light a flame inside them where their sense of hope had gone? They're already too many souls that have lost their light that was burning so bright Can you keep the flame lit on this dark night? Let the light rise and disperse Till there's no more greed left on this Earth
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CalmRavenPoet
Thank you very much 🙏
CalmRavenPoet
Thank you very much 🙏
AtigeMontana1
<p><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; caret-color: rgb(72, 72, 72); color: rgb(72, 72, 72); font-family: sans-serif, serif; font-size: 14px;">This is meaningful. Innocent lost in maturity. The more mature the more we are anxious. I like your powerful similes and the language of the poem suits the message. Well done Soul.</span></p>

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