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Let down your hair


We all know the story of Rapunzel

With her long, dazzling hair that the prince use to save her

But her hair was not lengthy

It was actually up to the jaw line

Her hair was able to lengthen because of the man who saved her

The one who was keeping her in the tower was a witch 

The most dominant and compelling witch in the land

But the man who saved her was not a prince

But the court jester

The prince of the vampires was who they served

That who he know how to break Rapunzel free

 

The Jack and Rapunzel had met once before at a ball

The danced together all night

Then she was lost

Desperately trying to find her

He found him self becoming a jester to the prince

That’s when jack learned where she was

And who was holding her

As well as how to stop her

And rescues Rapunzel

 

When he knew exactly what to do he set off

First to the caves to find the trolls

He needed a lock of a troll’s hair

But the Immense and brutal

So he went in prepared to fight

After a long barbarous he got a lock of hair

Without winning the fight just getting the hair he fled

He knew he wouldn’t be victorious

Nor could he be in the fight any longer 

 

Next he went to the otherworldly forest

Where the fairies lived

He needed the snot from a blue lake fairy

The snot of a fairy is more powerful the fairy or pixie dust

It took him a few days to find the lake that the blue lakes lived

But they were negotiable

They would bequeath their snot if he could help them

They needed help with the mermaid who lived in their waters

They were destroying their environment

Mermaids are usually ocean creatures

But they needed room to expand

Mermaids are not meant to be in a small, unsalted lake

The lake was turning them evil and needing to destroy

Jack had to get them back to the ocean or kill them

Some were willing to go back

But some refused

The lake was making them more powerful

Some of the mermaids became power hungry

They had to be stopped

After a long battle and a missing ear

He vanquished the sinister mermaids

The fairies were grateful

And bequeath him with their snot

 

One last thing Jack needed was blood

Blood from werewolf

Since he served the vampire he knew some werewolves

He was a close friend with many

But they are super proud and would never give their blood

So he had to take it

He met up with his friend who was a werewolf

Saying he was only in town for the night

Asking for shelter

He slipped wolfs bane into the tea they shared when they were catching up

His friend passed out Jack then took out a needle

He left right after getting the blood

 

All these ingredients where for a spell

A spell to make Rapunzel’s hair grow

Not using all of the werewolf’s blood

He got to the tower where she was being held

Cast the spell

Not using all of the werewolf’s blood he had

Then screamed

Rapunzel, Rapunzel let down your hair

When she got down they stared running

But the witch realized what’s going on

The witch when to stop them

That’s when jack drank the rest of the blood he had

Drinking werewolf blood will turn you into a werewolf for a sort time

They fought and he won

But he had lost his sight and his right arm in battle

Jack and Rapunzel got far away from that tower

 

But they didn’t not live happily ever after

The legends are true that she became a princess

But its because once she was saved

She left Jack for the vampire prince he worked for

She wanted the power of royalty

And immortally of a vampire

The evil witch how kept her

Twisted her into evil

She made the kingdom a horrifying place

He knew he had to stop her after he went through all that to save her

Jack was unable to stop her

 But the witch that he had defeated knew this was going to happen

And even though she was evil she was trying to protect the kingdom

After Jack died trying to stop her

The witch spelled the kingdom

She separated it into space where

So no one else can get effect by her wrath

 

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