Let me fall

I was desperate to hold on to you
but you had plans to drop me
and part of me wanted you to
it'd do me a favor, you'd set me free

You haven't let my hand go
but i'm slipping fast
you make no effort though
and I fall at last

Tears stream down my face
you're gone forever
I'm in a dark, lonely place
left to be seen never

Must be nice
to act like nothing happened
to return to paradise
when i've been abandoned

This poem is about: 
Me

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