Let me know

October 8, 2012

Let me know if you are different Let me know if you’re not like the rest Let me know if you’re willing to give effort Let me know if you’re just messing with my head Let me know if you like me for me Let me know if this is a dream or reality Let me know if this is the end or if we are just meant to be friends Let me know if this is a new beginning meant to be Let me know if this is what it will come down to Let me know if this is the way you are Let me know if you are you and willing to be kind Let me know if you are what I am meaning to find Let me know if this is going to be worth it Let me know if this how you are going to be Let me know if you are the right one for me

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jwienerNov 6, 2012

I love this poem, because it definitely speaks to all the different questions that people have when they fall in love. The repetition of "let me know" added to the uncertainty and hesitation and definitely made the poem flow. If you are interested in other types of poems that use repetition, check out how to write a haiku and lots of other types of poems in the "poetry writing tips" section under "resources!"