let there be.

by soniawrites

August 13, 2013

if there is a god

let me have one day

one day of smiles and laughter

not caused by drugs and liquor

let me roll up my sorrows

and smoke away my sadness

with out even using a lighter

let me pour my anger into a glass

and swallow my hate

without even opening a bottle.

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powerful.imaniAug 9, 2014

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SemmiSamsonFeb 23, 2014

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MVP-Most Valuable PoetAug 14, 2013

emotionally driven poemusing spirituality with drugs and alcohol was a great idea to express your view on what it takes to be a better persn, live a better lifenice poem that i'm pretty sure people can relate togreat job