Letting Go

January 20, 2019

When I saw her face again for the first time in a long time I froze
That smile that made me melt in the first place
Her doing so well
I felt stuck
Just looking at her again
I seen all of our memories in her eyes
I felt lost
Holding hands for the last time not knowing it would be the last time
It takes a toll on me now
I seen a life with her
But I'm better off without
I'm happy with where I'm at
She looks happy too
So I think it's time to let go of the past

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Comments (2)

DinaDina01Mar 26, 2019

Thank you so much! I highly appreciate the comment :) I'll for sure take a look

S.zaynab.kJan 20, 2019

A super cool poem in exes and moving on, you express in a fine articulate vivid way wow. Kudos. I see comments are not common here, but interaction is good for the human touch in this cold world.  Pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too.