Written by: Jordonnie

Written on: 2/19/2014

Please give me your honest opion on this. what I need to change here or what I need to add. Thanks.

This is such a depressing life,

I guess I will have to buy a book,

Not feel that way in pain,

As I write this poem,

I get angry at the world in vain,

As plain as I can see.

My last poem was not appropriate

For anyone to see

I was wrong to let anyone read it,

I can see that is wrong.

I have to be approved by elderly

On how to act at home.

I want to quit life,

Like someone quits a job.

I really shouldn’t be this way,

That’s not the way to act.

When I asked for an opinion,

I always got the facts.

I have to buy a book,

On not crying dramatically.

Being more positive is harder than it seems.

I guess it appears to others,

That I don’t act like a lady.

It appears to others that I act like three,

Which is more than they can bare.