A Life So Sublime
Once upon a time
A girl had a life so sublime
She had so much fun
And her worries were but none
Then one day
The fun simply went away
A pain so deep
A desire to just sleep
She wondered what was wrong
And why it hurt for so long
At this time
She wished to commit a crime
One against herself
Saying “I just hate myself.”
She pushed those feelings down
And tried to hide the frown
But after a while
She couldn’t maintain the smile
Finally there was an intervention
Completely filled with tension
But it was good advice
And knowing people cared was nice
From that point onward
Self-hate was no longer a word
Stuck in her brain
And there was far less pain
From this she learned
Those who care will be concerned
And struggles are a part
Of living while possessing a heart
She knew too that the pain
Would soon wane
And she would breakthrough
The hurt as she grew
And truly she did
The pain was completely rid
And at this time
She is again living a life so sublime
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