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life support


i was born in the borough of the bronx

where hip hop was born

everything that you can think of was originated

so pure that hip hop was baptize by true fans

who use creative minds to move the crowd with extraordinary music

in this day in age

thanks to the young generation

they tranform originality to blaphemous stupidity

where they don't know how to talk

they make sounds that would sexually entice a dog to get an erection

this form of rap sounds like an audition to fraggle rock

where anthems goes something like this 

clap clap come to fraggle rock clap clap

or a spelling bee contest that judges at best 

would permit contestants to pronounce and spell the word cat

by the way, its c a t , not k a t

it's a disgrcae how new york people want to be like everybody else

they want to act like they are from chicago, compton, down south

everywhere else , but new york

they are going through an identity crisis 

where searching for oneself is essential

with hip hop being so horrifically garbage

it's on life support gasping for air

keep it 100, it's so bad that i just pull the plug 

hip hop was just pronounce dead on the scene

no funeral service necessary

there won't be a burial site

why? hip hop just vanish into thin air

 

 

 

 

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Comments (4)

MVP-Most Valuable Poet
<p>no problem</p><p>amazing poems-keep writing</p>
powerful.imani
<p>That is so true&nbsp;</p><p>And thank you&nbsp;</p>
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
<p>hip hop nowadays is horrific in my eyes</p><p>music lost its purpose</p><p>no defintion, no meaning</p><p>i'll check out your latest work</p>
powerful.imani
<p>Yes This is so true rap music ain't what it use to be they talk more about Money and girls &nbsp;instead of the reality people see everyday and being able to listen to something to encourage there to keep pushing forward . All rappers should read this poem because you definitely kept it real .</p><p>Check out my poetry when you get a chance thank you&nbsp;</p>

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