Life is truly a gift

by Deciphersoul

August 10, 2015

Just to breath

Just to believe

From opening your eyes every day

To the path we lay

Nothing is more amazing then life

No matter what strife

Live life your way

Happy no matter what they say

Life is truly a gift

No matter how it may shift

Just remember this remark

Light always shines brighter in the dark

Live to fight

Live for what’s right

Live to be happy

No matter how sappy

Sadness just toss him

Because life is awesome

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Comments (6)

bmjudinNov 23, 2016

I love this! I think alot of people me included lose site of the important things, and take a lot for granted. This especially is awesome for some one that is having a bad day and is losing hope! Much needed in a time of thanksgiving, reminds me of how much I have in life and what to be thankful for!

TulioApr 10, 2016

Awesome

angelkimberlOct 21, 2015

Amazing, I love the positivity! Great Job!

tripOct 19, 2015

i really like the theme of yo poem....greatyu seem to bring out the same topic that Mother Theresa brought out - and in connect what yu write and her works...ya life can be awesome when we actually try to live it

Daniedee13Aug 10, 2015

Great poem!

ShayLa'RisseAug 10, 2015

This is amazing!!!!