Life vs death
lost in a sea of waves
left with-out a hope, cast out to sea
not a life jacket in sight, and no one knows your there
gone with out a trace, not coming back
i took my last breath and let myself go
as i began to lose contentiousness i felt someone pull me to the surface
i never thought i'd be so grateful for air in my lungs
i had so many thoughts where i thought i would be my last
i'd tried so hard and no one knew but then when i finally gave up.....
there was a boat coming to get my, i felt saved
when all my strength is gone and i let go,there always someone to catch me
now i stay at land where safely is available
where i know people will be there for me
no need to be off at sea when my friends and family are there for me at land
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