Life As We Know It

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20002
United States
38° 54' 18.9936" N, 76° 58' 53.7168" W

(poems go here) Life spits out challenges,memories take up space.Take a glane at the world then you will see the enemy, an opponent that has no defeats (our deepest fear is not that we cant but its the people that put us down).Goals dreams all decided by the enemy. The wonder is how the society we live in. Is it all defined by him, meaning life, does life cause are enemy to act this way or is it there own individual mind holding you so that you can not see your fears. Not allowing you to conquer them

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Btaylor12

i want to make it more emotional any ideas

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

add a stanza in how one can overcome enemy
expand the idea on what it takes to withstand hardships
on to something with this poem

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