The Life we live.

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There can not be a life better than ours.

full off happiness and joy. This life that we live without the worries

that most kids outside the world we know live.

We live in a world blinded by technology, by the selfishness of our piers,

 and by the simple fact that we dont give a dime about others.

There are kids your age fighting to survive the everyday life. 

Families strugling to exeed the social scale,. 

But us , we have none of those worries.

There can never be a better life than ours, 

because we live in a life blinded by our own hands. 

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