The liftoff
Sensors are in action
Slowing time
Still you see
See the shake and blur
Still you feel
Feel the vibration
Still you hear
Hear the thunder
Still you taste
Taste the excitement
Still you smell
Smell history
As everything total
Total to you
And your space chariot
It gives you data
But no simulation
Not one can resemble this
As you light the candle
And all system Go.
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