lime limerence
the lime squeezes releasing a taste
it lingers in your mouth and stays for days
the flavor is something you cannot describe
mild at first but then turns to a "high"
a sour ecstasy you could say
a sweet reward at the end of your day
but it soon turns to hours to minutes to seconds
the feeling creeps up in your mouth:
scratching, clawing, crawling back out
it doesn't go away,
you drink, you taste, you try other food
but nothing can compare--
no other can come close
you bear the simmer of lime as the juice hits your tongue
how the slight spritz stings your eyes when it is cut
you keep coming back
this lime never did anything special
it is just a lime after all
simple and easy, just saying "hi"
acknowledging itself for what it is
knowing how to please the person it's with
a slight whiff of its breeze
a little tug at your cheek
but from what you see, it's all you want it to be
from sour to tangy to sweet
you take it as a treat
but when limes are out of season—
when the lime is out of stock—
you are left wondering if you are down on luck
you start to go insane, craving something that isn't there
you start to hear your heart in your chest,
pounding, wanting that feeling of easy rest
but you can't get it without the lime
you can't live to see the time
your brain goes numb from too much thought
but sooner or later he comes back up
that lime- so sweet
then your mind begins to think
was it the lime or was it your head
was it great or mediocre at best
was he being friendly and you took it too far
but you will never know unless you analyze your lime shaped scar
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PersonalThemeAbstract
Lime as extended metaphor for person/attraction; increasingly personal/autobiographical
SparseMeasureDense
Multiple interwoven ideas: sensation, obsession, doubt, memory across dense stanzas
DarkSentimentBright
Oscillates between pleasure and anxiety; ends uncertain and melancholic
StillEnergyExplosive
Kinetic verbs (squeezes, scratching, clawing, pounding) but meditative pacing
MicroLengthEpic
Approximately 45 lines; sustained mid-length narrative exploration
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Central extended metaphor; simile, personification, sensory imagery throughout
LyricVoiceDramatic
Primarily lyric (internal reflection) with dramatic address; ambiguous pronouns shift focus
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