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Lips <3


Found desire placed upon your lips slipped into temptation a mind boggling game, taking hold of my reins controlling all of me slipped into your arms and you caught me it was all a sweet lie, a facade we became victims of the same taunting game trapped by desire mistaking feelings for this thing called lust a desire so strong that takes hold of your inner inhibitions wishing to let go, wishing to move on but captivated by your sweet lips those lips that are like a hunter's trap holding me prisoner to your sweet touch desire, passion, lust stringing me along wishing to take over as I'm held captive by the taste of your sweet lips.
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Eunoia
trap (put some for rhyme to it) This is really good for an early poem! I like the use of mind boggling yeah, like the above commenter, it flows nicely:)
ambercurry37
Well, you did a good job. It has a nice ebb and flow to it. Keep it up!
unspokenbeauty12
I am somewhat new to poetry and I look forward to hearing what all of you think (:

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