Living and Forgiving

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Poetic Chetta
September 18, 2014 at 2:47pm ·
"Living And Forgiving"

If I thought back
On every painful experience
I've overcame
My life would forever be the same
If I complained about every situation
That has occurred
My vision would not be clear
It would be blurred
Sometimes when I see the life that I have lived
Have I done all that is right
Am I worthy to be forgiven
Is it my decision why shall I ask
if I've been a back slider does he still have my back
will I have help will I get cut the slack
In some way can i get my life back on track
Could I face this world that we live in
I'm not always right But I'm forgiven
Don't have a life full of doubts
You can make it hear me out
You can conquer anything
you can fly here are your wings
In life you will fall
And he will build another wall
for you to keep climbing
Not wasting anytime and
instead of just living
You also have to do some forgiving
Forgive yourself don't be so hard on you
He's the answer within you
even though we fail him daily
He still wants us to be
Closer to him with certainty
In the past I've been done wrong
but by good outweighed my bad
and I'm still so strong
I just want to live
I don't want to be judge
Don't want to be mad
Not holding a grudge
I'm grateful I'm thankful
That he places us in the right angle
my life can be untangled
renewed refreshed
a living testimony for a marvelous test
In life you can choose
To get it together or be really blew
No matter what's happen to you
there's always another pair of shoes
That you can walk in or get some new
Trials and tribulations this is just the beginning
Just going to focus on living and forgiving
If he can forgive someone like me
Then I can forgive you
I don't want you to be discouraged
when you forgive don't worry
It's up to you
Revision
Living life and forgiving

By:Concetta Hardnett
09/14/2014

This poem is about: 
Me
My family
My community
My country
Our world

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