Lock With No Key
Is there consciousness
without language ...
how would you know
I believe that there is
but have nothing
to show
The ‘Hard Problem’
continues ...
unmetered unrhymed
Restated
unproven
— and left ill defined
(Radnor High School: January, 2026)
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Philosophical inquiry into consciousness and language; highly abstract
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