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Lonely Hearts


Hearts are manifestations of love— barely beating slowly dying beating softly; when resting, they are Lonely. They are resting when softly beating; dying slowly beating barely, love’s manifestations are hearts.
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bilha amagove
<p>would love to have a mentor like u, please will u be ma mentor?</p>
stefan23
Help to be my mentor, need help, username stefan23
Kylle18
I absolutely love the structure of this... so simplistic but so powerful
Arossa_Ameythyst_Midnight
Aubrie Smith please will you be my poetry mentor
thatjasminekidd
I love how you reversed the order of the words to make the second half. I'm new to this site >.< Could you give me some feedback on the couple poems I've uploaded please? Btw great job on this one(:
Destinedforgreatness1
Omg i love this ! care to give me feedback on my poem ? im new :T lol

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