As Long As I Feel
She gave me a kindness I never felt before
stirred a different kind of emotion in my heart
over a short period of time
it grew very quickly
the feelings ovewhelmed me
my heart was rarely used before I met her
and out of nowhere it was filled
with powerful peaceful emotions
shocked, it was awakened and it flourished
developing into a warmth that flooded over me
it was a new feeling
that she inspired withen me
I had no defense against my hearts yearning
it is the greatest feeling that I have ever felt in my life
and I was embraced by its warmth
I was lost inside the feeling she filled me with
and I never wanted to be found
even when my body grows old and it fails or breaks
as long as there is a piece of me that can feel
I will never forget her.
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