LOOK AT MOTHER

Look at my Mother!

Look at your Mother!

Let set aside what we see physically.

Open your mind; deep inside tell me what you see mentally.

Is it similarity? or a view of distinctive variety?.

 

My intention wasn’t on the Being.

I needed you to solve a puzzle and tell me what you see.

This isn’t a mind game, I expected nothing other than both have names,

I expected it, but not interested in names.

 

Look at my mother! What do you see?

Is it a stunning Beauty?,

A woman ready to carry out every duty?.

Assuming this isn’t a poem, Think hard stop being like a book worm.

 

Now look at your mother! What do you see?,

Right at your face but you can’t see.

Is she a character of wicked and mean?.

Stop yelling, that’s not what I mean.

This is just a poem, Over reacting has infested you like a computer worm.

 

My points are smaller, my facts are narrow.

Mothers are figure of sorrow.

Struggle in provision but they will never borrow.

She says; pains today will make a better tomorrow.

 

Who is mother?.

They are full of energy, inspiration and motivation.

They could be cruel,

When we go wrong that’s their tool.

She bought me a new shoe, so I could love school.

Mothers come in varieties but they are pretty cool.

 

Who is mother?.

She suffered your labour,

She starves and sacrifices her chamber,

Very protective like a soldier,

Defecating on them thinking its water closet.

Adore them, I love them, let’s make it a mindset.

 

“Look at your mother” and “Look at my mother”,

Examine the similarity and variety.

I mean “Look at” and “Mother” is the subject matter.

“my” and “your” don’t really matter.

 

All I wanted to tell you was, “Look at Mother”.

You disrespect one, you disrespect two,

Regardless of my mother or your mother,

Sometimes your mother, my mother.

 

Who is mother?.

Look at your mother, you will understand better.

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