The Looming Alternative

Location

78251
United States
29° 27' 54.4248" N, 98° 40' 35.6232" W

She's suicidal, 

Finally done,

Looking up to their idols,

Chest feels like a ton, 

Slowly losing vitals,

It's no longer fun,

The endless cycle.

She's not the only one,

Where no one seems to dial, 

So with the cold metal gun, 

She wins her title,

She no longer sees the sun.

This poem is about: 
My country

Comments

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741