Lost Breath

October 28, 2017

You take my breath away

I can't help myslef

Your smile

Makes me smile

The way your dimples form

To the sound of your voice

I'm so intrigued

To every aspect of you

To your carmel hair

And deep sea eyes

Captivate me

But I can not forget

Your loving soul

You remind me of the moon

Always wanting to know more

And being so close yet so far

You take my breath away

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