Lost In The Moment
Has beens
and hopefuls
Poseurs
and scribes
Wings of
detachment
Losers
and lies
Fated
direction
Choices
on file
Lost in
the moment
Destiny’s
— child
(Dreamsleep: December, 2025)
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Blends personal existential struggle with abstract philosophical questions about fate, choice, destiny.
Extremely dense; multiple competing ideas packed into fragmented lines with minimal connectors.
Predominantly negative: 'losers,' 'lies,' 'lost,' 'detachment' outweigh hopeful elements.
Explosive fragmentation, truncated syntax, ampersands create restless, kinetic intensity.
Micro poem; approximately 5-6 words per line, under 10 total lines.
Personification of destiny, wings as metaphor; moderate ornamentation through compressed imagery.
Pure lyric internal voice; introspective, no narrative or dramatic persona present.
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