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the lost ones


an opaque bed and 
old frames kept the room,
the pictures were dusty except
for the cracked 
glass, which remained
clear
 
 
a circular imprint former to
the indent- as real as the
toe that ached to 
be scratched.
he was a novice marksman,
but regardless, a 
target at such
a distance promises 
perfect aim...
 
and on
the day after,
  (everyone knows
      them, the favored 
        who haven't ever known
                       anybody)
you never 
understood the 
significance of a moment or
the lost ones
and so you sit 
with your commonwealth 
sneer- "what a shame!"
like you
wanted your 
faces smashed by 
those who thought 
the same but
in a different way
 
pity and absolution
are not one and the same;
neither are grievance and shame in 
that instant of ruminance
only your impulsions remain.
 
 
     so, tell me 
                 again- 
 
what the
fuck did you
think it
was?
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damien.wren.

i'm not anybody. i don't like capitalization. but i do like Camus and Bukowski.

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damien.wren.
<p>thank ye much- appreciate your feedback!</p>
Casey
<p>Something about this poem makes me love it so much.</p>

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