Lost in Translation

<p>This poem is so beautiful and sounds so good.Please do check my page out please.</p><p>Thank you</p><p>My poem page name is Rena Shivangi Boodram</p><p>Thank you so much all of your poems are so cool as a menator i would like you to check my poems.</p>

Clever! Language and writing style becomes another tool used to punctuate your message, devilishly clever!

Here's my link if you would like to read it!http://www.powerpoetry.org/poems/dont-give-26

Wow! From the beginning you had my attention. I like how you used grammar as a thought in this poem. The run-on sentence thing. Really gave this poem feeling through how you expressed it as you wrote. I'm impressed! Keep up the wonderful works of art. Maybe you can check out my poem I posted just today! I'm new on here. So maybe you could mentor me? Give me some criticism on my writing? What I can improve on.

<p>really beautiful writing.</p><p>&nbsp;</p>

<p>This is so beautiful, and something that I would really love to hear read out loud. I'm not quite ready to ask for help with my own poems yet, but I was hoping that I could ask in the future if there is something that I love more than the rest.</p>

I would love it if you read my poem. I've always kept my writing to myself so I'm not sure if I'm a good writer or not. I would much appreciate some advice. :) http://www.powerpoetry.org/poems/seemingly-oblivious-patriot

<p>This poem is great! Could you check out one of my poems as a mentor?</p><p>http://www.powerpoetry.org/poems/resurrection-4</p>

<p>Your verses are so fluid. It almost feels like a rap song. Could you please critique this: http://www.powerpoetry.org/poems/moms-love-story</p>

<p>Your poem is beautiful. Would you mind checking out my poem? It's called I love you Daddy.</p>

<p>Just completed my second piece. I call it "Cognitive Necropolis of the Disturbed Domicile". I do hope that you find this piece to be more compelling, and darker than the last piece. At this point you've probably noticed the recurring theme of introspective horrorcore, which I fancy myself a specialist in although I do many other styles as well, but I've always admired poets like Edgar Allen Poe, Shakespeare, and even a rapper by the name of Twisted Insane. These are my inspirations because they are easily the best when it comes to portraying brutal, gory, and openly offensive content (referring to the Catholic Church). I one day aspire to push past these and many others as I develop my own skill set so I would implore you please check it out when you have the time.&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>Link: www.powerpoetry.org/poems/cognitive-necropolis-disturbed-domicile</p><p>&nbsp;</p>

<p>This is really cool! Coincidentally we just so happen to share similar writing styles, and if it isn't much trouble I would really love it if you would leave a comment on my poem "Murder in the Mirror". I'm sort of a newcomer here although I've been writing for ages now, and I believe you would be the best person to help me advance my abilities further.&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>5/5 for the unorthodox method you employed here :)</p>

<p>Hey can you check my poems as a mentor? That'd be awesome...your poems are pretty cool</p>