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Love<You<God "Love through You, through God"


Am I wrong for saying, that through you I found God? Laid down my fears and put all trust in him I needed to trust him Because for once I felt free Free to love and feel And not regret those feelings I knew then, my heart was changing I found faith through God, which manifested into my Commitment to You I now understand what vows are Not false promises, but lifelong commandments which I live by It's like God sent you me and gave me sight at the same time Sight to see the future ahead of time Ahead of time I give myself to you, the way you give yourself to me And I thank God, for he touched you with a Golden Heart You have shown me what love looks like What it feels like, smells like, and the sounds... I'll never forget the sounds of such truth, spread out in the open I've changed In heart and mind, yet my spirit remains pure My spirit, full of Passion And yours, full of Ambition You match me with rigid corners and I Love it
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jwiener
This is a lovely poem. I especially enjoyed the line "You have shown me what love looks like / What it feels like, smells like, and the sounds..." because love seems like something you cannot touch or see, but you manage to use your senses to find love in this poem, and you use beautiful words to describe what you believe love to be.

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