Love

August 17, 2012

I treasure every moment, Every second with you, I smile, then I laugh, When im around you, My heart beats faster and faster, Our love change for every season, Love is my Desire Love is our passion of our peace, I love you,

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lynnzpooh777Aug 17, 2012

that is a great peom i need some one to help me with somthing like that if you dont mind

ambercurry37Aug 17, 2012

I liked it. The only thing I could comment on is the second to last line. It sort of throws off the rhythm of the poem. Other than that, great job.

mz.sassy01Aug 17, 2012

Hi everyone i really hope you liked my poem !! please coment or like if you enjyed my peom or what you liked about it or what i should fix please it would mean a lot to me . Thank you!