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Love-felt Torture


Don't fall for a girl like me.
I'm warning you now and I assure I'll warn you again.
My loves the kind of wretched feeling that can't leave you be.
I'll make you feel as if you are nothing but tin.
I'll take you to your favorite places 
and kiss your lips so sweetly.
Every place you ever loved are left with traces 
along with that feeling left upon your soul ever so neatly.
If my heart is something you shatter 
and you aren't even left with a crack.
Every location will only leave you sadder
my memory will haunt you enough so you will never go back.
 I will destroy you in the most beautiful way,
I will torture you obliviously 
and perhaps one day 
you will know why loving me was so easy.
 
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JuhJah

I'm just a 15 year old who has this love towards poetry and would highly appreciate any sort of constructive criticism. I write slams, haikus, sonnets, epics and I'm always willing to accept new forms of poetry.

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