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Love Letter (it's so surreal)


You make my body feel so real

  it's like it never existed at all before you

 

And it's so surreal

 because the ethereal breeze loves you the most 

 

And I can’t blame it

 as it tosses your hair to and fro in the heavenly air

 

Someday you say I will have a spot in your heart

 but why not now?

 

While we are hollow and young

  and risks only affect our minds leave our bodies unmarled


And the sky is filled with serene blessings

 sweet and tender 

 

Like the leaves on the autumn trees

 or the look of the pavement on an evening walk 

 

When the entire world glitters in your eyes as you talk

 and it makes me spin 

 
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