Love Letter (it's so surreal)
You make my body feel so real
it's like it never existed at all before you
And it's so surreal
because the ethereal breeze loves you the most
And I can’t blame it
as it tosses your hair to and fro in the heavenly air
Someday you say I will have a spot in your heart
but why not now?
While we are hollow and young
and risks only affect our minds leave our bodies unmarled
And the sky is filled with serene blessings
sweet and tender
Like the leaves on the autumn trees
or the look of the pavement on an evening walk
When the entire world glitters in your eyes as you talk
and it makes me spin
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