L.O.V.E. (Life's Only Valuable Expression)

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60636
United States
41° 46' 19.1352" N, 87° 40' 22.4652" W

This Poem is my everything. If you can, just listen and let me know what you think!

Guide that inspired this poem: 

Comments

heartstune55

Love it! I can picture it in my mind. Was that real or pure imagination?

Jerrodhunter93

I really appreciate that you liked it so much! I put a lot into it and I'm actually releasing the song version tomorrow! and no its not a true story. At least not for me, but it is for millions of people each year and I wanted to let people know that this is just as big a problem as anything else! Im really happy you liked it and tune in to my soundcloud tomorrow to hear the song version of it 

https://soundcloud.com/jrod-izawsome
 

Thanks :)

vonmarqui

this is dope bro

RebeccaYSPerez

Thank you so much for sending this in. It was sweet and witty and the ending was so heartbreaking. I think I really might cry over here. Thank you so much for sending this in.

I can't be sure, but judging by your comfort with the piece I can tell not only is this memorized but practice. I can see that you have had some hand movements in there, some of which may not have been picked up by the camera, so this is definitely a spoken word piece. So with that I congradulate you on being able to commit so much to your piece. 

Becca.

Jerrodhunter93

OMG YOU GET IT!!  Thank you i really appreciate the support! and I practiced this like my life depended on it! and i proformed it at a worldwide poery slam and a standing O at my talent show! you can listen to the song version on soundcloud tomorrow! You should check it out! And I love that you fell into the story with so much emotion thats what i wanted to get people to have! I wanted them to feel as if they were seeing things through my eyes! Thank you again!! and dont forget to check out the song tomorrow! 

https://soundcloud.com/jrod-izawsome

Thank You!! :))

floridaboy94

All I can say is that you created a great spoken word poem . 

floridaboy94

All I can say is that you created a great spoken word poem . 

Jerrodhunter93

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VYQGigweoHg

 

This is the Link to my First Single L.O.V.E. It has the same emotion and is the same story but the music brings you in like never before! In the words of Kanye "Close your eyes and imagine, feel the magic" 

Ronsheavoa

DROPPED MY POETRY BOOKED AT THE END!!!!

WOW!!  Dude YOU GOT A GIFT PLEASE PERSUE IT AND DON'T EVER LET ANYONE SHUT THAT MESSAGE OR YOU UP!!!!

PURELY AMAZING!!!!!! THANK YOU FOR REAL FOREAL.. GOD BLESS YOU AND YOUR ENDEAVORS!!

P.S:.. You should try to perform or link up with P4CM.

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