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Love Lives Here?


I am from the lazy summer days,

Cows grazing in pastures, 

Gentle breezes whispering tales of faraway lands.

I am from rows of endless golden corn,

Swaying as if partaking in a tender dance,

Holding the deer and rabbits in their midst.

 

I am from stars and moonlight, 

Who bear witness to midnight hunts and explorations. 

I am from endless open skies

That envelop me in their warm embrace. 

 

I am from a cold house,

That throws me to the heavens.

 

I am from running. 

 

I am from endless, searing summer days

Working the fields

until my hands stain the parched soil red.

I am from cows grazing in pastures, 

A higher power dictating when they will die.

I am from endless golden corn,

Swaying as though desperate to escape,

Hiding me away in their midst. 

 

I am from stars and moonlight,

Who bear witness to angry hands

 and slurred voices. 

I am from endless skies,

That suffocate me

With their constant presence of knowing,

But never telling.  


 

I am the deer. 

I am the deer who runs.

I am the rabbit who hides. 

I am the sparrow,

Who tries to fly

with shattered wings,

Whom the streams wash away 

The blood and screams

Of the bird still caged in the cold house. 

 
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Autobiographical rural/family origins grounded in personal concrete imagery.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple thematic strands: nature, home, trauma, identity compressed densely.

DarkSentimentBright

Shifts from pastoral beauty to darkness, abuse, suffering, entrapment.

StillEnergyExplosive

Intense emotional turbulence beneath reflective surface; urgent animal metaphors.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 45-50 lines; extended exploration across multiple stanzas.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Rich metaphor, personification, simile throughout; heavily ornamented language.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Lyric voice with shift to animal persona; mostly internal reflection.

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