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love lost


As your heart beats next to mines. I lay on my pillow and cry. How can a men so sweet cause so much pain. Our love will never be the same. Our passion turned into to envy. You tired to stop at what could be forever love.you step toe toe with your biggest foe. I really dont need more because your so immature. Be a men by faith and not by sight. Be my love, my soul mate,and much more. You dont understand you are the one I adore! I really did expect much more, to bad because your walking out the door.
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jessica188
<p>yes thats what im asking .</p>
RebeccaYSPerez
<p>I&#39;m not sure what you are asking. Do you mean to ask how can you become a better poet?</p><p>Becca. (PP Staff)</p>
jessica188
How can I do better

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