Love or Lust

Thu, 05/30/2013 - 09:58 -- LaGreg

Locations

46016
United States
40° 5' 46.3092" N, 85° 41' 41.4456" W
60644
United States
41° 52' 58.1844" N, 87° 45' 6.228" W

Are darkest day turn to dust with lust
The soul stirs in the muck with lust
My heart drowns in sorrow with love
My lungs seer and burn with love
Tell me now which should I pick
Lust or love which one is quick
So different yet virtually the same
Please pick for me cause I'll probably go insane

Comments

ohyeahamarys

Do you mean "our" in the first line because I'm not sure "are" makes sense.

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