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the love shown


Today at 3:46 PM There love that falls short in every way Cause it doesn't follow the love of the one who was slain And as I right on this page I can't help but compare this that will never change They search with open hearts and closed minds Lost and empty in need of something devine We hear of and use this like everyday But it's truth doesn't show in their ways I've seen and heard of it on many occasions And nothing seems quite like what i have been raised with Can't say that i've been shown it through others But one strong couple is better than many wrong lovers Those that toss something so magnificent away Giving up hope as it is they can't display Seen as the greatest gift to man kind Ruined and stomped upon because they are blind Hidden it is and sacred it has been kept A pure and clean species that not many will see yet The type of love given to us that we then are able to give That type that we stand by and through it we're able to live That type which doesn't just survive but flourishes and revives That type that is beyond natural and beyond mans eyes So through this we know that it's not us that keeps us But it is the love that is with in that shall never be crushed Celebrated to those who not only made it through The errors and teachings that claim of what's right to do Celebrated to those who are for ever growing Who pick up their heads and are forever bestowing A grace peace and love beyond simple thought A godly confidence in which u have been given To great to be bought To say that you are and forever will be a marriage full of passion of what they strive to see Who can say they have loved with compassion for so long Who could say that they are those who will forever hold on In a world where millions will never know what love is In this house you are one love...so it doesn't make a difference And everyday they see the ray of light as a sample Of the love with in you as you lead by example
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__Eviana
<p>Thank You soooo much&nbsp;I truly appreciate your feedback I wil def. keep writing and God bless you as well</p>
Angelwith1wing
<p>Beautiful poem! Love is expressed in so much meaning and depth that it has a great impact on my mind and hopefully others. God bless you and your gift to write such meaningful poem in such beautiful ways. Keep writing on my friend.&nbsp;</p>

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