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Today at 3:46 PM

There love that falls short in every way
Cause it doesn't follow the love of the one who was slain
And as I right on this page
I can't help but compare this that will never change
They search with open hearts and closed minds
Lost and empty in need of something devine
We hear of and use this like everyday
But it's truth doesn't show in their ways
I've seen and heard of it on many occasions
And nothing seems quite like what i have been raised with
Can't say that i've been shown it through others
But one strong couple is better than many wrong lovers
Those that toss something so magnificent away
Giving up hope as it is they can't display
Seen as the greatest gift to man kind
Ruined and stomped upon because they are blind
Hidden it is and sacred it has been kept
A pure and clean species that not many will see yet
The type of love given to us that we then are able to give
That type that we stand by and through it we're able to live
That type which doesn't just survive but flourishes and revives
That type that is beyond natural and beyond mans eyes
So through this we know that it's not us that keeps us
But it is the love that is with in that shall never be crushed
Celebrated to those who not only made it through
The errors and teachings that claim of what's right to do
Celebrated to those who are for ever growing
Who pick up their heads and are forever bestowing
A grace peace and love beyond simple thought
A godly confidence in which u have been given
To great to be bought
To say that you are and forever will be
a marriage full of passion of what they strive to see
Who can say they have loved with compassion for so long
Who could say that they are those who will forever hold on
In a world where millions will never know what love is
In this house you are one love...so it doesn't make a difference
And everyday they see the ray of light as a sample
Of the love with in you as you lead by example

Comments

Angelwith1wing

Beautiful poem! Love is expressed in so much meaning and depth that it has a great impact on my mind and hopefully others. God bless you and your gift to write such meaningful poem in such beautiful ways. Keep writing on my friend. 

__Eviana

Thank You soooo much I truly appreciate your feedback I wil def. keep writing and God bless you as well

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