love: a ticking time bomb?
"what makes you tick?"
that feeling of constantly giving everything that you have
every fiber of your being, to someone:
my heart, my soul. even a little bit of my dignity.
do you know that i've lied to my mother,
MY MOTHER
for you?
and I hate lying.
but I did it because i liked you, and I cared. I wanted you to know that I was in this.
please realize that i'm giving you everything I've got babe
and that I want it...I want it returned.
and do you know what else makes me tick?
if you ever call me a bitch, I will make sure that you regret the first time you EVER laid eyes on me.
understand?
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