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Love Vein


Why be with you if you can’t see me Puppy love was back then when we use to play touch, touch & call each other baby Why did you have to grow into something you can’t be? Our relationships feel like the pieces off the sea It was like one day you’re there but then you’re not here You told me you loved me but whatever that mean I tried to make this work but instead you put it in the dirt I looked to you as someone I can talk to but instead you turned into my worst enemy I put up with your all until I couldn’t take it anymore Went behind my mother back just to be with you and keep you happy And where did it leave me cold blooded on the side of the road Not caring about my feelings and the way that you see me The day has come that I had enough The lies hurt me deep to the point where I have to leave Hitting me was never a problem you left the proof just to show you didn’t love me The Scars and blood you left hanging from my vein showed it all Relationship was all I heard but there was no Relationship it was just a ship sinking
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Comments (3)

sunfox123
<p>Last line was incredibily evocative &nbsp;</p>
_MiMi
I was able to connect with your poem due to experiences with my first boyfriend. Healing takes time and the process has just begun.
YaniiReads
Super deep! I like where you went with the poem, it kept me reading. I felt your emotions as I read. Nice job =)

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