Lover lover

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Lover lover can you see me standing here?

Waiting so patiently to be heard.

I'll give up my last hopes if you'll just turn around.

please my dear lover just turn around.

 

faker faker can you hear me now?

Standing out away from the crowd.

I'm giving in to my last desire.

No more waiting for you to turn around.

 

Watcher watcher Can you see me now?

I see you standing to the side.

I gave my heart and sole and you left me in the dark.

Now my little watcher you'll finally see what invisibility really is.

 

Lover lover can you hear me now?

I'm standing in the crowd.

In the light all around.

My dear lover you've lost me now.

 

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