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Loving your awesome self


Love a wonderful feeling

Love with you is awesome

I look at you and I see 

eternity
internally 
it’s burning me
the fire in your eyes
& if you
could read my mind
you would probably 
just recite
a midsummer night’s
dream
And i believe that
this infatuation
is past
“just a phase” when 
i see your face im
placed in a daze
you 
amaze me
everyday in everyway
If you listen closely you hear the angels play
The Angels say
"You're my sunshine on a cloudy day. 
When it's cold outside you're my month of May"
I know I don't sing well
But I mean well
I'm attracted to you 
Like
Bees are to pollen 
See
Baby these feelings 
I know They ain't common 
& the opinions and comments of others
Are redundant
The way I feel I know you're  heavensent
from my angle you're an angel
& lord knows I'm thankful
For your presence its a present when you present yourself 
Women would trade their strengths to have your flaws
Breaking necks & dropping jaws
With the switch of your hips & flip of your hair leaving us all in awe
aww man
when you do what ya do
If I had an hour to live
I would spend it with you
when you do what you do
If I had one wish i would give it to you
Because
Your happiness is my happiness
Your failure we both share
Your success is my success 
& your pain we both bare 
You're awesome and so is the the love we share

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