Loyalty
A flashlight
sat next to candle
In a dark night
and someone once asked
Which one shined bright
Well said the person
Sitting real near
What is the diference
If its dark?
You see you light a candle
With a hot flame
But it all depends
if theres wind, if theres rain
The flame will go out
It will last through a night
But it will dissapear
When a storm takes sight
A flashlight on the other hand
Clearly man made
Will work perfectly
With a battery as its aid
It will shine through days
It will shine through nights
It will shine even
when a storm takes sight
It will never go away,
when you need it most anyway
Yet it will last
If the battery is ok
Both shine bright
So you asked the wrong question
What you really need to know
Is one that wont easily go
So next time
you endure a stormy night
Go get the one
That will do you right
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